Final Project — Senator Athletics Concept Paper
July 18, 2011
Founded in 1904, Davis & Elkins College is a small liberal arts college nestled in the mountains of north central West Virginia. With a highly desirable 12:1 student to faculty ratio, students enjoy individual attention in a nurturing college environment designed to provide a positive college experience.
Athletics have always been an integral part of campus life at Davis & Elkins College. The Athletics Department, as an extension of the educational process is committed to assisting student athletes to achieve their academic and athletic potential and become contributing members of society.
In order for Senators Athletics to reach out and engage the local Randolph County community, an image piece should be created. The commercials should portray the excitement of NCAA Division II sports available in their own back yard.
A :30 television spot showcasing the top male & female sports on campus, while also touching on the lesser-draw sports, should be produced and aired on local network television affiliates during morning and evening sports news. I recommend spending additional funds to air first in the commercial rotation to maximize our exposure.
Placements should also be made on the cable ESPN channel and around WVU football & basketball games. Leveraging YouTube, the college’s website & Facebook page along with the Senators Athletic website & Facebook page should also be considered. While posting the :30 spots on individual athletes’ Facebook pages is a violation of NCAA rules and regulations, coaches could encourage their athletes to ‘like’ the YouTube and Facebook spots and thus create a link to the video(s).
The spots should focus on the action-packed excitement available close to home at all Senators athletic events. Senator games/matches/meets aren’t difficult to get to, nor costly to attend. With many events taking place during the evening, they are the perfect ‘cheap night out’ for family and friends.
No need to call ahead and reserve tickets, the D&E Senators are ‘your’ team. Over 55% of the student body and almost 20% of Senator Athletes come from the state of West Virginia. Thanks to the Highland Scholarship program, residents from the seven surrounding counties can attend to D&E at the same rate of the state funded institutions.
The level of athleticism of NCAA Division II sports is definitely something to witness. The D&E fan experience allows you to be close enough to the action to feel the pulse of the game. We don’t want you to simply ‘watch’ the games, we want you to participate. Hear the athletes’ hearts pound, see their sweat build, and feel their breath as they run past you down the court. The simple act of watching a Senators commercial should bring all levels of sports fans to the edge of their seat. We’ll not be satisfied until you’re screaming for the coach to let you in the game!
Working to make the audience part of the game experience, the spots need to appeal to a wide range of demographics — sports enthusiast, families looking for something to do, and anyone wanting a bit of excitement. Sports enthusiasts would target men age 18 – 45. Families with children would target adults 18 – 35.
Senator Athletics is FUN! EXCITING! And a great place to bring the family.
- Senator action…up close & personal…no binoculars here!
- If you miss a Senators event, you miss a lot of fun
- Commercials should make you want to play the game yourself
The main goal of the creative is to convey excitement around Senator athletic events. Excitement on the field…excitement in the hearts and minds of Senator athletes…and excitement in the local community.
The spot will open with three to four seconds of shots showing people walking to games, game crowd scenes, kids / families in the stands enjoying pregame, etc. while a male announcer invites fans to experience a Senators game. No background music, just a normal heartbeat barely audible.
A game whistle sounds and images quickly change to action footage of various sports ‘starting’ their respective game as the heartbeat increases in pulse and volume. Images and heartbeat continue to increase in frequency and intensity. The final seconds will show a graduated red screen with a Senators logo pulsing to a fast, loud heartbeat trying to come to rest. On screen copy will appeal to fans to not miss a second of Senator action.
:30 Script
Senator Excitement
| Video | Audio | |
| 1. | WS crowd walking through parking lot wearing red & white Senator gear motioning the camera to follow | ANNC: COME TO; SX: heart beat |
| 2. | CU of 3 young children together with red & white painted faces | ANNC: THE CAMPUS; |
| 3 | CU of students wearing school colors (red/white) walking on campus to game | ANNC: OF DAVIS AND; SX: heart beat |
| 4. | CU Cheerleaders piled into a convertible during a campus ‘Spirit Parade’ | ANNC: ELKINS COLLEGE |
| 5. | Shot of Highlanders bagpipe band marching towards fields | SX: heart beat & bagpipe music |
| 6. | Shot of (3) student fans wearing unibody suits waving bam stix before a soccer match | ANNC: AND EXPERIENCE |
| 7. | Crowd (inside sport) doing the ‘wave’ | ANNC: SENATOR; SX: heart beat |
| 8. | CU shot of team lined up for National Anthem | ANNC: NATION |
| 9. | Fade to black | SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 10. | Black screen | SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 11. | Basketball team bursting through large Senator banner | ANNC: SX: one long whistle blow |
| 12. | Baseball team running onto field | ANNC: SENATOR; SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 13. | Huge volleyball spike | ANNC: ATHLETICS; SX: player grunt & heart beat (amplified) |
| 14. | cross country team starting a race | SX: heart beat; breathing (amplified) |
| 15. | CU swimmer doing butterfly | SX: heart beat; splashing water (amplified) |
| 16. | Men’s soccer player heads the ball | ANNC: EDGE; SX: amplified head-hitting-ball sound & player grunt; heart beat |
| 17. | WS of crowd of fans all standing up (fast) as they concentrate on the game | SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 18. | Golfer teeing off; shot from side view | ANNC: OF; SX: golf ball hitting driver; heart beat (amplified) |
| 19. | Softball player swinging the bat; shot from side | ANNC: YOUR; SX: ball hitting bat; heart beat (amplified) |
| 20. | WS of crown ALL turning their heads from left to right (following the action) | ANNC: SEAT; SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 21. | CU Tennis player hitting forehand volley, concentration of face | SX: tennis ball hitting racket & heart beat (amplified) |
| 22. | Massive basketball dunk in traffic | ANNC: EXCITEMENT; SX: player breathing, background game noise; heart beat (all amplified) |
| 23. | WS Crowd cheers; show all standing in unison; concentrating on the action; shot from the side | SX: crowd roar & heart beat (amplified) |
| 24. | Softball pitcher throwing; concentration on player face | SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 25. | WS Soccer player brings the ball down field in a crowd of opponents | ANNC: COME ON; SX: heavy breathing; heart beat (amplified) |
| 26. | Women’s Basketball – Fast break & pass | ANNC: GET IN; SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 27. | CU Tennis player backhand return | ANNC: THE GAME; SX: heart beat & breathing (amplified) |
| 28. | WS Soccer scores a goal as opposing goalie dives and misses | SX: crowd roar & heart beat (amplified) |
| 29. | Soccer player running down the side of the field high-fiving the crowd of fans on the sidelines. | SX: crowd cheering; heart beat (amplified) |
| 30. | WS Baseball Team celebrates win; whole team on pitching mound | SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 31. | WS Crowd going wild; jumping up & down; shot from side | SX: crowd cheering & heart beat (amplified) |
| 32. | CU of group of player faces showing intense emotion at win | SX: heart beat (amplified) |
| 33. | CU of fans in the stands going wild! | SX: heart beat (amplified) crowd cheering |
| 34. | Graduated red screen; Senator logo dominating the middle of the screen; Logo pulsing with heartbeat; below logo copy to read (not pulsing) “Men’s Soccer vs. West Virginia Wesleyan College” next line “Saturday, September 3 @ 2:00 PM” next line “Join the Excitement @ www.SenatorsNation.com NCAA Division II logo in lower right side of screen | ANNC: WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?; SX: heart beat- several beats |
Property Rights on the Internet. Great Idea. How?
May 16, 2010
Property rights and the internet…I’m sure you toss and turn most nights pondering the quandary. But while current laws and regulations governing traditional media outlets with regard to commercial speech, libel laws, negligence laws, privacy laws, copyright laws and trademark laws can be applied to emerging media, there is still very little on the books that specifically targets the Internet. 
“So what does this mean to me”, you ask? Well, it depends on your internet footprint.
Those with a large internet presence have the most to lose from property right infringement. When you consider that the content we put out on Facebook, Twitter, blogs, etc. is designed, by the very nature of the platform, to encourage interaction in the hope of going viral, you begin to see the problem.
Accept for traditional academic guidelines regarding plagiarism and my elementary knowledge of trademarks and copyrights, I worried little about security. I skipped merrily through my blogs without much thought to protecting myself or crediting photos. I’m sure there are billions of ignorant people just like me, except they probably have more followers. But as you may know from episodes of Law & Order, ignorance of the law is no defense.
Historically, our government has been slow to react to changes in society and typically takes a one-size-fits-all approach to regulating anything new. The social media explosion and almost daily enhancements, new gadgets and capabilities have made regulating emerging media that much more difficult. Too often government action is too late, too weak and contains more loopholes than health care legislation. The lack of serious regulations governing the banking industry is a great example of the fix-it-after-it-becomes-a-serious-problem mentality.
Don’t get me wrong. The thought of violating any law or regulation scares the pajeemers out me.
I’m not cut out for prison, but I would also venture to guess that I don’t fit the profile of an internet scammer out to steal a trademark. The majority of people out there want to do what’s right (that’s my glass-half-full mentality). But court rulings are all over the map, rules and regulations too complicated, (hence law school) and technology definitely outpaces safeguards.
Participating in what the Internet has to offer is by nature a simple process. Starting your own blog, Facebook or Twitter account is a snap. It seems almost counter-intuitive that protecting yourself and your content is so complicated. Make it S I M P L E people. I’m sure there’s a computer geek out there somewhere that can come up with a way to protect trademarks and copy from cut and paste thievery.
By the way, all the photos in today’s blog were retrieved from Royalty Free Scared Photos (free photo section) with a simple right click and then download onto this blog platform.
All is NOT what it seems
May 13, 2010
Does anyone really know what they’re getting when they
something? You know that simple act of typing in a word or short phrase and hitting the “search” button. Now, I bet you think that some sort of unbiased, natural search optimization occurs and the results show the most popular, most visited sites first and proceed in descending order. WRONG!
Nowadays, what you’ll get is a jumbled list of natural, paid placement and paid inclusion search results. Back in 2005 the Pew Internet and American Life Project reported that “only one in six users of Internet search engines can tell the difference between unbiased search results and paid advertisements.” Yikes!
Paid placement refers to advertisers paying a fee in exchange for higher rankings within search results. You simply need to type in one of their pre-determined search words or “tags” and they will be listed at the top of the search results. Paid inclusion also refers to advertisers paying a fee in exchange for being listed within the search list, but there is no guarantee where you’ll be placed on the list.
Thankfully, most major search engines have conformed in some manner to new FTC recommendations to provide “clear and conspicuous disclosure” of search results. By now, you’ve probably noticed “Sponsored Links” at the top of Google searches have been replaced by a less obvious faint color block. These are paid placements. To date, Google does not accept paid inclusion. Check the table below for more info:
Today’s Advertorial: Stretching Ethical Boundaries.
May 12, 2010
In my previous life, I sold ads into a network of local newspapers. It was a wonderful job. The employees generally cared about the reputation of the paper and followed strict guidelines to remain unbiased in the reporting. Editorial was in one section of the building and advertising was waaaayyyyy across the building in another section. It was absolutely taboo to think that the two would mix in any way. That was then.
Today, the rules of the game have changed and advertorials seem to be straddling the line between news and advertising like never before. Advertorials have emerged as the latest trend in both traditional and emerging media.
By their very nature, advertorials are disguised to lead readers to view them as editorial content with real news value. What makes spotting these cloaked ads even more difficult is the fact that some advertorial topics are indeed newsworthy and do present some educational value to consumers. The proverbial sheep in wolfs clothing, so to speak.
Traditional outlets such as newspapers and magazines typically include “paid advertising” labels at the top of the ad and in some cases even insert third party disclaimers so as to not mislead a reader. With minimal government regulations on Internet marketing, online media outlets are largely left to the honor system with regard to advertorials.
So what’s driving this trend?
Money, of course. Patricia Riedman of Advertising Age writes, “in today’s economic climate, what once was unthinkable by the most successful search engines is now being accepted as status quo and a means of eking out desperately needed online ad revenue.
So, do you consider advertorials unethical? In my mind, anything having to disguise itself as something else is not right. I learned this early on when my mother convinced me that a helping of cooked carrots was actually sweet potatoes! Be on the lookout…all is not what it seems!

















